The success of your direct marketing relies on two things: good old-fashioned research with a dash of copywriting cunning. 
You might think that writing a piece of direct mail is easy. All you need is a description of your product, the price, a method for the customer to get in touch to order your product and Bob’s your uncle.
If that’s your approach, Bob won’t even be related to you because it won’t work.
Behind the innocuous façade of a direct mail letter lurks an array of mystical mechanics. In my post, Direct Mail – The Copywriter’s Secret Weapon, I identified four factors that contribute to your campaign’s success:
- The list
- The offer
- The format
- The copy.
To take things a step further, I’ll now explore the common magic ingredients required for effective direct response marketing, regardless of its format.
Get your direct marketing offer out there – fast
This is the most obvious aspect but, surprisingly, one that is sometimes overlooked.
Get your offer out there immediately (in your heading), and then repeat it again and again. Copywriting is a lot like storytelling – you create a drama by showing your readers the power of your product and how it will benefit their lives. There are two different ways of achieving this:
1. When your product is desirable (e.g. jewellery, holidays etc.)
Show your readers a vision in the header or opening paragraph using the benefits – looking good, showing excellent taste, enjoying a luxury holiday etc. This is the gold at the end of the rainbow.
Show your reader how and why your product will fulfil all their dreams and desires (and don’t forget to mention the offer again).
2. Overcoming pain and fear
This will help you by providing a formula for benefits that help you overcome things you don’t want like dirty clothes, higher taxes, ill-health etc.
First, describe the pain (e.g. disease, dirt etc.), then introduce your offer (laundry detergent, vitamins etc.), which is the cure and then follow it up with evidence of how your proposal will cure the pain.
The direct marketing carrot and the stick
This is an excellent tool within the freelance copywriter’s arsenal. It is a means of telling your reader that good things will happen if they respond to your offer and that there may be undesirable consequences if they don’t.
So, if you were selling washing powder, your offer would be a brand new, scientifically proven formula that gets all your laundry clean the first time.
Carrot – buy the detergent and enjoy sparklingly clean clothes forever and be incredibly successful in all that you do.
Stick – use your regular detergent, wear dull clothes, and spend your life aspiring to be your friend who always looks clean and bright and is incredibly successful.
So, there you go, direct response mail is much more than just throwing a sales letter together. The words that you use must convince the reader that your product or service is right for them. My next post will look at the characteristics found in successful direct mail letters.
Contact Sally Ormond, Briar Copywriting and get your sales letters singing.